March 2nd is the birthday of Theodor Geisel, better known to young readers as Dr Seuss, and once again Vivian Kirkfield (www.viviankirkfield.com) is hosting a 50 precious words challenge!
The challenge is to write a story appropriate for kids ages 12 or under, using only 50 words…they can all be different words, or you can use some of them over and over…just as long as the total word count for the story is 50 or less. For more information pop over to Vivian’s website (https://viviankirkfield.com/2017/03/02/50preciouswords-writing-challenge-is-open/#comments)
This year I was inspired by a very noisy crow and his find…happy reading everyone!
Nuts!
(40 words)
Crow found a nut…
“My nut!” he cawed greedily.
Jay squawked loudly as crow flew over his tree.
Crow dropped the nut!
Jay caught the nut.
“My nut!” he squawked cheekily.
Squirrel bounced along the branch.
Jay dropped the nut!
Squirrel caught the nut.
“My nut!” he squeaked gleefully.
Woodpecker hammered!
Squirrel dropped the nut!
The nut
t
uuuu
m
bbbb
l
eeee
d
to the ground.
Pig walked under the tree.
“My nut!” he grunted and gobbled it up!
“NUTS!”
Thanks for stopping by. I’m off to read the other entries…good luck everyone!
I love this nutty story Julie! Well done. 🙂
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Thanks Traci. I laughed when I saw your ‘nutty’ story too!
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Great job in only 40 words!
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Thanks Patricia! Can’t wait to catch up on reading the other entries.
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Cute story! I love how you visually showed the tumble. 🙂
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Thanks Jen 🙂
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Julie! WOW! Love your story…so funny…perfect with the short phrasing…and the best ending ever! Hats off to you for an absolutely awesome entry!
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Thanks Vivian, I am so happy that you love it!!
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Cute Story! I love the visual tumble you created in the story.
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Thanks Jen, glad you like the ‘tumble’ – saw Vivian stack her words with her story for the Valentine contest and I loved the idea so much I just had to use it!
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Julie I really enjoyed your story. It was fun to read, and I couldn’t wait to find out who was actually going to get that nut!
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Thank you, Jean. So glad you liked it! It was fun to write!
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Love the crow and the refrain as well as the use of white space. Good luck!
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Thanks Kathy. I am a bit of a fan of birds in the garden…even had a friendly Jay who wanted hand feeding everyday for a year!
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So cute! This has a great flow and rounds out well. Good entry!
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Thanks Heather. Good luck to you!
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Very cute and clever.
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What a funny tiny tale. I love the stacked letters.
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Thanks Maria 🙂
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This story is so cute! It really caught my eye and I love the ending, very funny! Well done!
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Thank you so much.
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hehehe, good for pig!!
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Thanks Saba…someone was going to get that nut!
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Love your use of shaped text. Great ending!
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Thanks Joanne, I thought that it added movement.
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So cute, and loved the visual of the tumbling nut. Great entry!
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Thanks Christyne, so glad you liked it.
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Such a fun story and I too loved the tumbling text! There’s so much fun to be had in just 50 words.
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Thank you. I love this 50 word contest!
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What a lucky pig. Good luck!
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Thanks Gregory.
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Nutty and fun-love it, Julie 🙂 Good luck!
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This is so much fun! I love it! Well done!
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Thanks Jill. All thanks to inspiration from my garden!
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Ooooo, I like this chain story. And the tumble visual was great!
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Thanks so much, Linda.
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Oh that pig! I like the repetition of the word “nut.”
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Thank you…he was very naughty eating Crow’s nut!
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Cute and visual story. 🙂
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Thank you, Lynn.
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The progression of events in this nutty story made me smile😊
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Thank you, Janie. It was a fun writing project!
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Oh nuts! That darn pig 😉 Thanks for the smiles. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like this story – the adventures of a nut. I enjoyed the added interest with the word “tumbled”. And then the pig got it! That’s fitting. Lucky pig!
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Fun story. It’s hard to hold on to our possessions. Enjoy things as they come at you.
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Perfectly written and presented!
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Such a clever allegory in a nutshell, Julie! (40 words! Gasp!) As others have commented, I love how “tumbled” tumbles, too.
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It was fun following the nut’s storied journey into Pig’s belly — well done!
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Your story made me laugh out loud! Well done.
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