It’s beginning to feel a lot like Christmas…! It’s Susanna Hill’s Annual Holiday Contest!
The contest: Write a children’s holiday story using the basic format/concept of The Twelve Days of Christmas. Poetry or prose, silly or serious or sweet, religious or not, based on Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa or whatever you celebrate, but it is not to exceed 300 words (excluding the title).
So without any further ado…here is my entry for 2016.
Robbin’ Robin (299 words)
by Julie Abery
On the first day of Christmas Red Robin came to me and asked for a house in the tree.
On the second day of Christmas Red Robin came to me and cheeped for a star which he hung at the top of the tree.
On the third day of Christmas Red Robin came to me and chirped for some lights to be twirled up the trunk of the tree.
On the fourth day of Christmas Red Robin came to me and pecked at a cookie, which he dunked in my nice cup of tea!
On the fifth day of Christmas Red Robin came to see what else was free ???
Cookies and tea
Twirling lights
Sparkle and shine from the star at the top of the tree!
On the sixth day of Christmas Red Robin came to me and begged for my colour tv.
On the seventh day of Christmas Red Robin came to me, needing a chair to sit comfortably watching tv.
On the eighth day of Christmas Red Robin came to me, asking for speakers as the north wind’s a little noisy.
On the ninth day of Christmas Red Robin came to me, wanting my Playbox ’cause there’s nothing to watch on TV!
On the tenth of Christmas my mummy said to me, “It’s very strange, but our house seems a little empty!”
On the eleventh day of Christmas my daddy said to me “What’s going on? Because our stuff’s all up in the tree!”
On the twelfth day of Christmas can you guess where I’ll be…?
I’m hiding out …
“What’s going on?”
“It’s very strange”
Wanting a Playbox
Asking for speakers
Needing a chair
Colour TV
What else is free??
Cookies and tea
Twirling lights
Sparkle and shine
…with the robin atop of the tree!
Happy Holidays Everyone!
I really enjoyed this. Those robins are always so greedy. Ha.
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The visual that creates is really fun. Makes me want a tree house.
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I think I’ll join the robin in the tree too. Great story. Good luck and happy holidays!
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Thanks, Gregory! Be sure to take a wooly hat…it’s cold in the tree! Happy holidays to you too!
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This was so much fun, Julie…I smiled when I read the line about the colour TV…and I think a red robin would be lovely at the top of a Christmas tree. Great story! Have the happiest of holidays…and all that is good and wonderful for the New Year, dear friend.
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Thanks, Vivian! Happy holidays to you too, and the bestest wishes for the new year! 🎄
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If you give a robin a house in the tree, then the robin will ask for a star…And so on…Great concept!
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Thank you, Linda!
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I enjoyed the humor in this story! So fun! And I love seeing robins in the snow.
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Thanks Gaby! I love the little robins in my garden too 🙂 Took the photo in the post a couple of weeks ago 🙂
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Love the image evoked of a decked-out tree hideaway! Great job!
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Thanks, Amanda.🎄
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This was a lot of fun to read. Robins are my favorite bird! Great job, and good luck!
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Glad you enjoyed it! Happy holidays! 🎄
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I love robins at Christmas – it reminds me of England. And your little guy brings such cheeky fun. Well done!
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Thank you, Patricia. Happy holidays🎄
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That Robbin is living better than me! That is some tree house. Loved your story, good luck in the contest!
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Thanks, Jean! Happy holidays! 🎄
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Wonderful, Julie! So cleverly done! Great rhythm, fun story. You made me laugh out loud with Dad’s line about all the stuff being up in the tree! 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in the fun. Happy Holidays!
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Thank you, Susanna, and thank you for another fabulous contest with such a supportive and caring writing community! I love taking part in them!
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What a great story filled with lots of imagery. And isn’t that what picture books are supposed to do? Wonderful job. And wonderful humor. I want to move in to that house. 😉
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Thanks, Robyn! Happy holidays 🎄
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